Thursday, 27 September 2012

Getting Out of the Desert

Ting Dong was a 32 year old pilot. He had black hair and he wore a black leather jacket.
Ting Dong and his friend, Ken, decided to go up for a parachute jump because it was a sunny day. They took off and got really high when the  wing fell off and the plane crashed. Luckily, they had parachutes.
They landed in a desert and Ken got lost, so Ting Dong was on his own. He walked and walked, but all he could see was yellow sand.


He got really hot and thirsty, so he walked and walked until he came to a forest on the edge of the desert. In the forest he saw snakes, spiders and other bugs.
He walked and he found a waterfall. He slowly walked to the waterfall and he drank until he wasn’t thirsty any more.
Ting Dong saw a man called Fred. Ting Dong said, “Oh my gosh. Please help me get out out of the forest,” so the man helped Ting Dong get out of the forest and get back to his family.

1 comment:

  1. Cameron your story is exciting and I felt really thirsty when I read it
    . Well done.

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